SHARP TOOTH Me Ken and Joe looked at the house we heard so much about it ,it was dark old and smelly.We also heard so many stories about it. We looked at the house very curious about. Then we heard a ear piercing scream. We had to go in and find out who made that loud noise out on Ellwyn street where the house is and what had happened.
As I walked into the mysterious old falling apart house with Ken and Joe. I was scared ,xtremly scared. We had heard that there was some type of killer that was inside. People told stories that whoever ever came in would never come out. We were curious so we went in. It was very dark and mysterious inside. So we walked around in this enormous house for a long time we went around in every room seeing what was inside . We went through this odd scary house floor by floor inspecting them very carefully. We started on the top floor and worked our way down little by little one step at a time making sure we didn’t miss one little thing. The three found the girl on the 2nd floor she was dead. She looked like she had been brutally murdered and tortured to death in the worse way possible.She looked like something from hell .She was all disfigured she looked similar to the killer.After he killed her,he sucked the blood and slurped it on his sharp teeth.
Joe, John and I were shocked we didn’t know what we should do.We were traumatized by what we saw, she was ripped apart and beaten. When we finally got ourselves back together from what we saw , we were about to call the cops and figure out the situation.But then out of know where this disfigured menace came out us.His head looked like a stone yet it moved. He had this massive tooth and he looked like he was going to kill us. The stories were true a ghost killers did exist. He came after John boom, he knocked him on the floor and tortured him.It was like a vicous dog let out of the his cage . I jumped on the ghost and started hitting him it was useless. He seemed to not bother me , but he chased after Ken , Ken was scared and he ran,he knocked Ken down and brutally stabbed him. After that I knew it was the end for me I ran and ran as fast as I could. I didn’t look back till I made it outside I looked back and nothing was after me. I was safe. I passed out on the grass in complete shock. I was Petrified from what had happened.
I woke up that morning and found out what had happened. I contacted the cops and they sent a whole team of police into the house inspect the place after about one and a half hours of searching they found the body’s including the mysterious girl that we found that night. They looked at the bodies and inspected them very closely one by one. There were these little marks on there bodies. They were small and teeth bites all over the place. They also found stabs in there bodies. They wondered who would do such a thing. They thought that the person who did this must have been out of there mind. But they looked even closer and found out that those teeth marks were actually teeth in the skin. It was Sharp Tooth who had killed , the stories were true. They found the bodies but they would never be able to document what happened because soon enough they were all killed.
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5 comments:
Good story. It was scary how the ghost killed the people. I think it was a good ending that the cops were killed.
I though it was a ver detailed story, but you need to fix the wording in the first couple of sentences. you have some that dont make to much sense.
I really like the story a lot but I think you need to fix up your first paragraph. I also think you need to check your grammar a little bit. Otherwise, great setting!
This was a great horror story but you need to fix your gramatical errors like where you wrote whoever ever comes in. But I liked your story it was very detailed like the tooth marks and the hols bites etc.
This story is really good. It kept me scared throughout the whole thing. The last sentence was perfect...really scary and left the reader hanging.
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