Bradley’s life overall, is great he is an average man. Although one day something ruins his great life. The thing that ruins his great life is a man named Joe that he is going to live next to. Since on account that he is going to move in soon. Joe is just one of those guys that freaks you out at first sight! Joe is the reason why Bradley wishes he was never born.
Bradley lived in a small neighborhood in Florida he had a nice house and was an average single guy. Then one day he got news a new neighbor was moving in next to him named Joe. So Bradley was excited to have some other single guy to watch games with and hang out with. So the day Joe was moving in Bradley decided to go over and meet Joe while his movers were unpacking his things. Bradley was just pulling in his driveway coming from the gym when he noticed a white warehouse truck in the house next to his. He figures to himself that Joe was moving in, so he walked next-door to meet Joe. When he arrived at the front door he rang the door bell twice, he waited for about a minute until the door was opened by a man about 6 feet tall, with gray hair, a eye that looked particularly evil and seemed to be about 55 years old. The man said “Yea what do you want.” Bradley answered “I’m looking for a man named Joe, I live next-door.” The man replied “I’m Joe nice to meet you.” Bradley said “Nice to meet you to, I just wanted to introduce myself my name is Bradley.” He replied “OK thanks I’m Joe I guess I’m your new neighbor, but can we talk later I am busy.” Bradley said “Sure we can anytime see you later.” Joe replied “OK buy” and he shut the door. As Bradley walked back to his house he pondered to himself, he’s a pretty nice guy but that eye of his is a nasty one. This was true because his eye was pale and hazed over almost like it posed him in a way.
A month had passed and Bradley had not seen Joe since they had met when Joe was moving in. Bradley wondered where he could be. So he decided to go check on him, he rang the door bell many times but no one was there. He peered into the house it was dull and filled with boxes. As he looked in the house something caught Bradley’s eye it was a table, sprawled out on the table were about 20 guns, among these were not just 9mm and hand guns for protection but military rifles, automatic rifles, and shotguns. Then at that moment he heard a car screaming down the street so Bradley bolted to his home and watched from window with all the doors locked. It was Joe he was back he pulled into his driveway and entered into his home soon after that he came out with two duffle bags and drove away again. All night Bradley pondered what was in those bags; guns, body parts, or clothes he had to know.
Later that night he went back over to Joe’s home to take a look inside. He brought along with him an old American express card. He went around to the back and slide the card through the lock to break in, it worked he slowly opened the door and crept in as quiet as a mouse shutting the door behind him. He was ever so quiet making sure no one was home. He searched the house no one was home and no one was expected back for a while, he assumed so he had time. He searched for the bags to see if he had brought them back but Joe hadn’t yet. Instead he went to the front room he had peered into to look at the guns when he entered the room they weren’t all there 2 handguns and a shotgun were gone. He thought so that’s what was in the bags. He decided to search around in Joe’s room even though it was still all boxed up except a few essentials like his TV, radio, and his clothes. Then Bradley thought to look under the bed where anything could be hidden, so he did. There he found a box full of people’s identities and a travel bag you store your suits in when traveling, so Bradley pulled it from under the bed and unzipped it there he found something so disturbing he almost threw up. In the bag was a dead body! Then he saw the glow of head lights through the window, Bradley zipped up the bag and pushed it under the bed. As he fled out of the back door he dropped his wallet out of his pocket. He rushed into his house and locked all the doors and sat down with the TV on. Bradley then grabbed the phone and Mike his buddy and told him to come over now. He then called Officer Lee and Officer Frank and also called them over to his home.
Meanwhile Joe entered his home went to the kitchen near the back door and flipped the light on. There he sat at the table and ate a sandwich and drank a cold beer with it. As he sat at the table he noticed the back door was unlocked he got up and went to lock it when he saw the wallet lying on the ground. Joe picked it up and read the Drivers license inside the wallet the name of the person was Bradley Holt. Joe realized at that moment Bradley was on to him and had to be taken out soon before he opened his mouth. Joe decided July 18, 2006 sounded great.
An hour later Mike, Off. Lee and Off. Frank arrived at Bradley’s house and were welcomed in by Bradley. “What is wrong!” they all said. “My new neighbor is a murder!” he replied shaking. “Ha ha ha” they all laughed. “No really he is I looked in his house and there were guns and he leaves for long periods of time and there was a dead body and…..” “Stop” said Officer Lee. “I think you need to get some sleep so we are going to leave.” said Officer Lee. “Good night.” they said and left. “Wait wait!” Bradley said.
Well it was the month of July and no one would believe him so he decided to deal with it by just forgetting it and not getting near Joes home or Joe.
Then that next week Bradley noticed his wallet was gone. Where could I have put it he thought? AHHHHH I haven’t had it since the night I broke in to Joes home and he gets identities to track people and kill them he thought so Joes after me, well I am going to be ready.
Today marked the 18th of July. While Bradley was out at the gym Joe was preparing for the big night. He broke into Bradley’s home and set up three cameras one in the kitchen, one in the living room and one in Bradley’s room. Then he quickly exited. On his way home Bradley stopped at a pizza place and grabbed a pizza for dinner since it was going on 5:00. He went home ate and watched TV until about 10:00 he flipped the TV off and went into his room where Joe watched him through the camera get into bed and fall asleep. Then Joe made his move and went to Bradley’s house. There he broke in very quietly he looked around then headed up stairs. Bradley heard him and got out of bed and hid behind his bedroom door. Joe entered the room and pulled his gun out. He entered the room but found no one there! Then as he walked completely in the room BAM! Bradley jumped on his back the killer raged on and swung at Bradley who fought for the Gun then BANG BANG! Two shots were fired they both lay on the ground now Bradley thought he was dead, but then stood up to see blood pouring from Joe he had been shot in the struggle. The evil eyed murderer named Joe was dead!
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I like this story very much. The only thing that you could fix is by adding periods because some of the sentances didn't make sense to me.
Great story but there are a lot of grammatical mistakes, especialy in the first paragraph. For instance,in the third sentence you wrote, you wrote IS instead of HIS. You also need better punctuation. Alot of the first paragraph is repetative too.
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